How to Write a Short Story

Collect ideas for your story., Begin with the basics of a short story., Find inspiration from real people., Know your characters., Limit the breadth of your story., Decide who will tell the story., Organize your thoughts., Start writing., Come out...

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  1. Step 1: Collect ideas for your story.

    Inspiration can strike at any time, so carry a notepad with you wherever you go so that you can write down story ideas as they come to you.

    Most of the time, you’ll just think of small snippets of information (a catastrophic event around which you can build a plot, a character’s name or appearance, etc.), but you will sometimes get lucky and a whole story will reveal itself to you in a couple of minutes.

    If you have trouble finding inspiration or if you need to write a story in a hurry (for, as an example, a class), learn how to brainstorm.

    If you can't come up with any ideas, you might have to look to family and friends for inspiration.

    Experience usually helps to build good plots.

    Many of Isaac Asimov's mysteries came from experience of certain incidents.

    If you can't think of any ideas, mix different plots from different stories.

    Make up something
    - the events of the story doesn't always have to be true.

    If you get a topic to write on, don't take the title literally. for example :
    If the topic is "Open door" think of it metaphorically, you can talk about a door to your mind or how a book can open a door to another world.

    A portal to take you to the future, an opportunity.

    Try to reach the topic in a different approach; it makes the story more creative. , After you've chosen an idea, you need to remember the basics of a short story before writing one.

    The steps to a good short story are:
    Flash back : start from an incident that happened before your story started.

    Dialogue : a conversation between the characters or a monologue.

    Action :
    Start with something happening or your character doing something.

    Introduction: introduce characters, setting, time, weather, etc.

    Initiating action: the point of a story that starts the rising action.

    Rising action: events leading up to the climax or turning point.

    Climax: the most intense point or turning point of the story.

    Falling action: your story begins to conclude.

    Cliffhanger : don't complete your story and don't tell the audience what happens in the end and leave them to imagine the end.

    This is useful if you run out of time and don't have time to finish the story.

    Resolution: a satisfying ending to the story in which the central conflict is resolved—or not! You don't have to write your short story in order.

    If you have an idea for a great conclusion, write it down.

    Move backward or forward from your starting idea (it may or may not be the beginning of the story) and ask yourself questions. “What happened before this?” “What happens next?” , If you have trouble understanding or finding attributes of a character, turn to your life.

    You can easily borrow attributes of people you know or even strangers you notice.

    For example, you might notice that someone is always drinking a cup of coffee, talks in a loud, booming voice, is always typing away at the computer, etc.

    All of these observations would together make a very interesting character.

    Your character can even blend attributes of a number of people. , For a story to be believable, the characters have to feel genuine and realistic.

    It can be a difficult task to create interesting and realistic characters.

    But here are a few strategies to create "real people" to populate your story:
    Write a list, titled with the character's name, and write all the attributes you can think of, from their position in the orchestra to their favorite color, from their central motivations to their favorite foods.

    Do they talk with an accent? Do they have any quirky mannerisms? You won’t include all this information in your story, but the more you know, the more your characters will come to life, both for you and for the reader.

    Make sure your characters' personalities are not perfect.

    Every character needs to have some flaws, some problems, some imperfections and some insecurities.

    You might assume that people wouldn't like to read about a character with a lot of flaws, but that couldn't be farther from the truth.

    Batman wouldn't be The Dark Knight if he weren't a borderline sociopath! People can relate to characters with problems, as that's realistic.

    When trying to come up with flaws, you don't need to give your character some huge, bizarre issue (although you definitely can).

    For most characters, try to stick with things you know about.

    For example, the character could have anger issues, be afraid of water, be lonely, dislike being around other people, smoke too much, etc.

    Any or all of these could be developed further. , A novel can occur over millions of years and include a multitude of subplots, a variety of locations, and an army of supporting characters.

    The main events of a short story should occur in a relatively short period of time (days or even minutes), and you typically won’t be able to develop effectively more than one plot, two or three main characters, and one setting.

    If your story has much more breadth, it probably needs to be a novella or novel. , There are three main points of view from which to tell a story: first-person (“I”), second-person (“you”), and third-person (“he” or “she”).

    In a first-person story, a character in the story tells the story; in the second-person the reader is made a character in the story; and in the third-person, an outside narrator tells the story. (Second-person narration is rarely used.) Keep in mind that first-person narrators can only tell what they know (which will be limited to what they see firsthand or are told by others), while third-person narrators can either know everything and explore every character’s thoughts (third-person omniscient) or be limited to only that which can be observed by one character (third-person limited).

    You can also mix and match.

    For example, you could switch between a first-person narrative in one chapter, and third-person in another, or even have more than one first-person point of view.

    An excellent example of this is the short story "Rashōmon"

    by Akutagawa Ryūnosuke.

    This was later turned into a movie of the same name by Akira Kurosawa. , After you've prepared the basic elements of your story, it can be helpful to make some sort of time-line to help you decide what should happen when.

    Your story should consist at least of an introduction, initiating incident, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution.

    You can draw or write a visual with very simple descriptions of what should happen in each of these stages.

    Having this done will help you keep focused when writing the story, and you can easily make changes to it, so that you are able to keep a steady flow as you write the full story. , Depending on how thoroughly you've sketched out your plot and characters, the actual writing process may simply be one of choosing the right words.

    Generally, however, writing is arduous.

    You probably won’t know your characters and plot as well as you thought, but it doesn't matter—in a sense, they will tell you what they need, even if you paint them into a corner.

    Plus, there's always the second draft! , The first page—some would say the first sentence—of any writing should grab the reader’s attention and leave him/her wanting more.

    A quick start is especially important in short stories because you don’t have much room to tell your story.

    Don’t dillydally with long introductions of the characters or uninteresting descriptions of the setting: get right into the plot, and reveal details about the characters and setting piece-by-piece as you go along. , You’re almost certain to hit some bumps in the road to finishing your story.

    You've got to work through them, though.

    Set aside a time to write each and every day, and make it a goal to finish, say, a page each day.

    Even if you end up throwing away what you wrote on that day, you've been writing and thinking about the story, and that will keep you going in the long run.

    Consider participating in writing groups or activities.

    One very good activity for writers of all kinds is "National Novel Writing Month," or NaNoWriMo.Every year, from November 1 through November 30th, you are tasked with writing a novel of at least 50,000 words.

    Brilliance and quality are off the table—the goal is the act of writing.

    Check out the reference link for more information. , As you develop your story, you may want to turn your plot in a different direction than you had planned, or you may want to substantially change or remove a character.

    Listen to your characters if they tell you to do something different, and don’t worry about scrapping your plans altogether if you can make a better story as you go. , When you've finished the story, go back through it and correct any mechanical mistakes, as well as logical and semantic errors.

    In general, make sure the story flows and the characters and their problems are introduced and resolved appropriately.

    If you have time, put the completed story down for a few days or weeks before editing.

    Distancing yourself from the story in this way will help you see it more clearly when you pick it back up. , Send your revised and edited story off to a trusted friend or relative for revisions, edits, and suggestions.

    Let your reviewers know that you want to hear their real opinions of the story.

    Give them time to read it and think about it, and give them a copy that they can write on.

    Make sure you consider everything that your reviewers tell you—not just the parts you would like to hear.

    Thank your reviewers for reading your story, and don’t argue with them.

    Incorporate whatever edits, revisions, and suggestions you feel are valid.

    Your writing will be better if you carefully consider constructive criticism, but you don’t have to follow all the advice you get.

    Some of the suggestions may not be very good.

    It’s your story, and you need to make the final call! , It may be frustrating if you're having trouble writing.

    You can run out of steam, get angry at characters, and feel sad—or even a little guilty—when a beloved character dies or is killed.

    Just know that you will, in all probability, doubt your own writing skills at some point.

    This is totally normal.

    You'll feel it's not worth continuing, and that you should give up and become a waiter in a dive cafeteria.

    When these thoughts arise, they can easily take over and make you quit then and there.

    One of the hardest tasks as a writer is to learn to squash those feelings and continue writing.

    When you begin to have these doubtful feelings, or get tired or bored, stop writing! You can get up, take a walk, get a snack, watch TV, or anything to relax.

    When you return, do so with a fresh mind.

    You may still not want to write, but tell yourself a few good things about your story—anything about it, from one good passage you wrote, to a well-thought out dialogue, to an interesting character—and congratulate yourself.

    You're doing something most people can't do.

    If someone else knows about your story and has read it, they can also be a good source of encouragement.

    Just tell yourself that you will finish this story because you want to.

    It doesn't matter if the story isn't the best ever written—there will be others.

    If you have a goal to finish it, that's what you'll do. , Nothing can help you learn how to write a good short story better than reading good short stories.

    Note the style and how the author uses brevity to their advantage.

    Reading a variety of authors and styles will help you learn how to adopt different "voices" for each story you write, and broaden your creative palette.

    Pay attention to how the authors develop their characters, write dialogue, and structure their plots.

    Here are some suggestions: "I, Robot"

    by Issac Asimov. "Steps"

    by Jerzy Kosinski. "The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County"

    by Mark Twain. "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty"

    by James Thurber. "A Sound of Thunder"

    by Ray Bradbury. "Three Questions"

    by Leo Tolstoy "Mr Gum and the Power Crystals" by Andy Stanton, for a children's one. (This is a basic one) "Brokeback Mountain"

    by Annie Proulx Note: many of these short stories have been turned into successful films, or have become familiar cultural references.

    For example, "A Sound of Thunder"

    the most re-published sci-fi short story of all time, introduces us to the "butterfly effect." Philip K.

    Dick's stories have given us Blade Runner ("Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep"), Total Recall ("We Can Remember It for You Wholesale"), Minority Report ("Minority Report"), A Scanner Darkly ("A Scanner Darkly"), and many others.

    It is important to have all these elements in order so you can have a head start of ideas to work with.
  2. Step 2: Begin with the basics of a short story.

  3. Step 3: Find inspiration from real people.

  4. Step 4: Know your characters.

  5. Step 5: Limit the breadth of your story.

  6. Step 6: Decide who will tell the story.

  7. Step 7: Organize your thoughts.

  8. Step 8: Start writing.

  9. Step 9: Come out swinging.

  10. Step 10: Keep writing.

  11. Step 11: Let the story write itself.

  12. Step 12: Revise and edit.

  13. Step 13: Get some second opinions.

  14. Step 14: Don't give up.

Detailed Guide

Inspiration can strike at any time, so carry a notepad with you wherever you go so that you can write down story ideas as they come to you.

Most of the time, you’ll just think of small snippets of information (a catastrophic event around which you can build a plot, a character’s name or appearance, etc.), but you will sometimes get lucky and a whole story will reveal itself to you in a couple of minutes.

If you have trouble finding inspiration or if you need to write a story in a hurry (for, as an example, a class), learn how to brainstorm.

If you can't come up with any ideas, you might have to look to family and friends for inspiration.

Experience usually helps to build good plots.

Many of Isaac Asimov's mysteries came from experience of certain incidents.

If you can't think of any ideas, mix different plots from different stories.

Make up something
- the events of the story doesn't always have to be true.

If you get a topic to write on, don't take the title literally. for example :
If the topic is "Open door" think of it metaphorically, you can talk about a door to your mind or how a book can open a door to another world.

A portal to take you to the future, an opportunity.

Try to reach the topic in a different approach; it makes the story more creative. , After you've chosen an idea, you need to remember the basics of a short story before writing one.

The steps to a good short story are:
Flash back : start from an incident that happened before your story started.

Dialogue : a conversation between the characters or a monologue.

Action :
Start with something happening or your character doing something.

Introduction: introduce characters, setting, time, weather, etc.

Initiating action: the point of a story that starts the rising action.

Rising action: events leading up to the climax or turning point.

Climax: the most intense point or turning point of the story.

Falling action: your story begins to conclude.

Cliffhanger : don't complete your story and don't tell the audience what happens in the end and leave them to imagine the end.

This is useful if you run out of time and don't have time to finish the story.

Resolution: a satisfying ending to the story in which the central conflict is resolved—or not! You don't have to write your short story in order.

If you have an idea for a great conclusion, write it down.

Move backward or forward from your starting idea (it may or may not be the beginning of the story) and ask yourself questions. “What happened before this?” “What happens next?” , If you have trouble understanding or finding attributes of a character, turn to your life.

You can easily borrow attributes of people you know or even strangers you notice.

For example, you might notice that someone is always drinking a cup of coffee, talks in a loud, booming voice, is always typing away at the computer, etc.

All of these observations would together make a very interesting character.

Your character can even blend attributes of a number of people. , For a story to be believable, the characters have to feel genuine and realistic.

It can be a difficult task to create interesting and realistic characters.

But here are a few strategies to create "real people" to populate your story:
Write a list, titled with the character's name, and write all the attributes you can think of, from their position in the orchestra to their favorite color, from their central motivations to their favorite foods.

Do they talk with an accent? Do they have any quirky mannerisms? You won’t include all this information in your story, but the more you know, the more your characters will come to life, both for you and for the reader.

Make sure your characters' personalities are not perfect.

Every character needs to have some flaws, some problems, some imperfections and some insecurities.

You might assume that people wouldn't like to read about a character with a lot of flaws, but that couldn't be farther from the truth.

Batman wouldn't be The Dark Knight if he weren't a borderline sociopath! People can relate to characters with problems, as that's realistic.

When trying to come up with flaws, you don't need to give your character some huge, bizarre issue (although you definitely can).

For most characters, try to stick with things you know about.

For example, the character could have anger issues, be afraid of water, be lonely, dislike being around other people, smoke too much, etc.

Any or all of these could be developed further. , A novel can occur over millions of years and include a multitude of subplots, a variety of locations, and an army of supporting characters.

The main events of a short story should occur in a relatively short period of time (days or even minutes), and you typically won’t be able to develop effectively more than one plot, two or three main characters, and one setting.

If your story has much more breadth, it probably needs to be a novella or novel. , There are three main points of view from which to tell a story: first-person (“I”), second-person (“you”), and third-person (“he” or “she”).

In a first-person story, a character in the story tells the story; in the second-person the reader is made a character in the story; and in the third-person, an outside narrator tells the story. (Second-person narration is rarely used.) Keep in mind that first-person narrators can only tell what they know (which will be limited to what they see firsthand or are told by others), while third-person narrators can either know everything and explore every character’s thoughts (third-person omniscient) or be limited to only that which can be observed by one character (third-person limited).

You can also mix and match.

For example, you could switch between a first-person narrative in one chapter, and third-person in another, or even have more than one first-person point of view.

An excellent example of this is the short story "Rashōmon"

by Akutagawa Ryūnosuke.

This was later turned into a movie of the same name by Akira Kurosawa. , After you've prepared the basic elements of your story, it can be helpful to make some sort of time-line to help you decide what should happen when.

Your story should consist at least of an introduction, initiating incident, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution.

You can draw or write a visual with very simple descriptions of what should happen in each of these stages.

Having this done will help you keep focused when writing the story, and you can easily make changes to it, so that you are able to keep a steady flow as you write the full story. , Depending on how thoroughly you've sketched out your plot and characters, the actual writing process may simply be one of choosing the right words.

Generally, however, writing is arduous.

You probably won’t know your characters and plot as well as you thought, but it doesn't matter—in a sense, they will tell you what they need, even if you paint them into a corner.

Plus, there's always the second draft! , The first page—some would say the first sentence—of any writing should grab the reader’s attention and leave him/her wanting more.

A quick start is especially important in short stories because you don’t have much room to tell your story.

Don’t dillydally with long introductions of the characters or uninteresting descriptions of the setting: get right into the plot, and reveal details about the characters and setting piece-by-piece as you go along. , You’re almost certain to hit some bumps in the road to finishing your story.

You've got to work through them, though.

Set aside a time to write each and every day, and make it a goal to finish, say, a page each day.

Even if you end up throwing away what you wrote on that day, you've been writing and thinking about the story, and that will keep you going in the long run.

Consider participating in writing groups or activities.

One very good activity for writers of all kinds is "National Novel Writing Month," or NaNoWriMo.Every year, from November 1 through November 30th, you are tasked with writing a novel of at least 50,000 words.

Brilliance and quality are off the table—the goal is the act of writing.

Check out the reference link for more information. , As you develop your story, you may want to turn your plot in a different direction than you had planned, or you may want to substantially change or remove a character.

Listen to your characters if they tell you to do something different, and don’t worry about scrapping your plans altogether if you can make a better story as you go. , When you've finished the story, go back through it and correct any mechanical mistakes, as well as logical and semantic errors.

In general, make sure the story flows and the characters and their problems are introduced and resolved appropriately.

If you have time, put the completed story down for a few days or weeks before editing.

Distancing yourself from the story in this way will help you see it more clearly when you pick it back up. , Send your revised and edited story off to a trusted friend or relative for revisions, edits, and suggestions.

Let your reviewers know that you want to hear their real opinions of the story.

Give them time to read it and think about it, and give them a copy that they can write on.

Make sure you consider everything that your reviewers tell you—not just the parts you would like to hear.

Thank your reviewers for reading your story, and don’t argue with them.

Incorporate whatever edits, revisions, and suggestions you feel are valid.

Your writing will be better if you carefully consider constructive criticism, but you don’t have to follow all the advice you get.

Some of the suggestions may not be very good.

It’s your story, and you need to make the final call! , It may be frustrating if you're having trouble writing.

You can run out of steam, get angry at characters, and feel sad—or even a little guilty—when a beloved character dies or is killed.

Just know that you will, in all probability, doubt your own writing skills at some point.

This is totally normal.

You'll feel it's not worth continuing, and that you should give up and become a waiter in a dive cafeteria.

When these thoughts arise, they can easily take over and make you quit then and there.

One of the hardest tasks as a writer is to learn to squash those feelings and continue writing.

When you begin to have these doubtful feelings, or get tired or bored, stop writing! You can get up, take a walk, get a snack, watch TV, or anything to relax.

When you return, do so with a fresh mind.

You may still not want to write, but tell yourself a few good things about your story—anything about it, from one good passage you wrote, to a well-thought out dialogue, to an interesting character—and congratulate yourself.

You're doing something most people can't do.

If someone else knows about your story and has read it, they can also be a good source of encouragement.

Just tell yourself that you will finish this story because you want to.

It doesn't matter if the story isn't the best ever written—there will be others.

If you have a goal to finish it, that's what you'll do. , Nothing can help you learn how to write a good short story better than reading good short stories.

Note the style and how the author uses brevity to their advantage.

Reading a variety of authors and styles will help you learn how to adopt different "voices" for each story you write, and broaden your creative palette.

Pay attention to how the authors develop their characters, write dialogue, and structure their plots.

Here are some suggestions: "I, Robot"

by Issac Asimov. "Steps"

by Jerzy Kosinski. "The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County"

by Mark Twain. "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty"

by James Thurber. "A Sound of Thunder"

by Ray Bradbury. "Three Questions"

by Leo Tolstoy "Mr Gum and the Power Crystals" by Andy Stanton, for a children's one. (This is a basic one) "Brokeback Mountain"

by Annie Proulx Note: many of these short stories have been turned into successful films, or have become familiar cultural references.

For example, "A Sound of Thunder"

the most re-published sci-fi short story of all time, introduces us to the "butterfly effect." Philip K.

Dick's stories have given us Blade Runner ("Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep"), Total Recall ("We Can Remember It for You Wholesale"), Minority Report ("Minority Report"), A Scanner Darkly ("A Scanner Darkly"), and many others.

It is important to have all these elements in order so you can have a head start of ideas to work with.

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